The tower had neither stairs nor door, but near the top was a little window. When the enchantress wanted to go in, she placed herself beneath it and cried:
'Rapunzel, Rapunzel,
Let down your hair to me.'
What went well:
Rapunzel's hair is much longer and makes her character more obvious.
Having two characters interact within the scene makes it more of an illustration and tells the story.
What to improve:
IMAGE ISN'T SHARP ENOUGH
More trees
Better lighting
Consider COMPOSITION...
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