What works well:
Using clear thread was successful in making the dolls look like they are in flight.
The characters are true to the story but not identical to the Disney version or other illustrator's versions.
What needs work:
Shadows wouldn't appear in the sky so the lighting needs fixing.
Tree tops look strange. Maybe bigger fur tree tops would look better here. The dolls should also be higher in the sky, and maybe a night sky? Wider frame. Draw out compositions.
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