Works well:
More practice... yet again a very raw and unfinished 'Smallfilms' aesthetic.
Needs work:
TABLE IS VERY UNSTABLE AND WAY TOO WOBBLY IN ANIMATION.
Bad framing - composition isn't well-considered... should be either a close up of drinking or focus on the food and table, too much boring building behind him.
Lighting isn't great, his face looks shiny.
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