Friday, 27 April 2018

Mixed Group Crit 27/4/18

Present: Ben Farr, Megan Naylor-Wardle, James Moore, Dana Davis, Jay Stelling

What I can take away from others:
James recently worked in television production with a team in Ireland (work experience placement) which he really enjoyed and offered me some advice for when I go to the BBC - be friendly, make them remember you, get involved, take lots of photos if you can.
Consider your portfolio and what you will include.

Feedback on my work:
Strong narrative. Relation of text-image works well.
Not much time left but you have been really organised and know exactly what you need to do to finish on time.
You don't NEED to print the full book for submission! Maybe just have a few finished pages? Print for the exhibition.
Eyes have been digitally enhanced - tone down on some of the darker images where they look a bit too bright/out of place.


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