Patrick, Shelly Kaur, Megan Swan, Sophia Watts
It did feel a bit strange to be preparing for a group crit by way of a group crit - and presenting the same information we'd already shared a week ago to the same group again - but I did manage to explain what I'd been looking at in terms of building the street and how I'd moved on since last time.
We discussed how my focus would now be on the crafting of this world and setting the tone for a story. I might not have time to tell the ENTIRE STORY but I should plan and explore this world.
Sophia is also looking at children's books and is making a proposal for a children's book rather than writing the whole thing which is a good idea. Patrick suggested not to add any text onto the actual images, as that should be left to a designer.
It was suggested that I do some collaboration, working with different disciplines, or at least consider how this project could be improved/extended by working with others. As a director or working in an animation studio, I would have lots of different people with different skills that could help in bringing a world like this to life.
Extra Points:
Go to the Museum of Childhood
Know your audience
Could you do some animation or video with this scene? Moving, simple panning? Interactive is fun!
For Friday:
A more concise, concrete plan of what you're going to do
use the words 'I'm going to' not 'I'd like to' or 'I might'
3-5 minute presentation. Use your tone of voice!
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