Dream within a Dream from Jay Stelling on Vimeo.
Added a few things mentioned in the feedback.
+ Vignetting - does this make it too dark? I love how stormy and intense it makes the atmosphere. Much more serious, without it could pass for a fairy tale forest.
+Increased the amount of rain, giving the scene greater depth (rainfall in layers, suggestion of depth of field)
+Warmer glow in the window, shines through the ink splodge type at the end. Mysterious and intriguing.
- Crow's still not moving its beak at the same time as the cawing
- More trees/background behind the background?
I've stuck to the initial intention in my proposal form and I have impressed myself by actually achieving this. Even after discovering roughing last year, I found it difficult to follow that initial plan as I would come up with better ideas later on... but I knew that this storyboard could work and that it was just up to me to make it happen.
I stayed with my storyboard and made something I am proud of, though I am sick of listening to that same soundtrack over and over again now.
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